Angel of Death

Hey Ky! I hope your Christmas went well ^ _^ Anyways, this was a good chapter and I have no complaints this time. Like I said before, I'm just going ...

This...was...great. You may say that it needs a lot of work but really it's not as much as you think it should have. I liked the flow it had the ...

Hey Ash! I'm giving reviews as a Christmas gift to all of my friends so if you have anything that you want critiqued just ask. Anyways, I liked this chapter. ...

Hey Jiggy!!! I enjoyed this a lot, but this is a little bit long so I'm going to take a wee little break and I'll be right back. #0 and ...

Hey there Suzuhara!!! I quite liked this, though I thought it was a bit bland. It wouldn't hurt if there was a little imagery here and there and colorful sentences. ...

Hey Ky, I liked this chapter. It was really easy to read and you didn't use too many similes and metaphors. There were a couple of errors here and there, ...

Hello there! Hmm, I've been saying this a lot today, but I have a love/don't like relationship with this poem. You have a very good, solidly written beginning but then ...

W-O-W Hello there, dear. I'm Angel, and I will be the reviewer of this poem today. ^_^ This mirrored the intricacies of teenage love really well. And I really could ...

Hello again! I actually liked this one, and your emotions and descriptions were wonderfully executed. As bubble said, I like this the way it is. This could easily be turned ...

Hey! I saw this floatin' around and I thought that I should check it out. Hmm, I have a love/don't like relationship with this poem. I am all for the ...

Hello again!! Connie up there already pointed out the nit-picks, so I'm here to drown you in compliments. I like Dylan, and I can tell she's an awesome character. She ...

I quite like this! I like the fact that you decided to use Dylan ( a boy name) for a girl. (I'm a sucker when it comes to that type ...

This was beautiful! All of your sentences flowed and I was very much entertained. Though I feel kinda sick, I thank you for writing such an original piece. I've never ...

Hey Kylan! When I saw this, I just couldn't resist. Okay, Jiggy and Suze already pointed out the little nitpicks. But as for what I thought of it, I am ...

Hey Jare-bear! I apologize for getting to this late, cuz now everyone has gotten to the nit-picks! But don't worry, I have a few things of my own that I ...